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Hi, @First Spear,


It definitely looks like a tree, and the little pot on the bottom sort of suggests obliquely that it is a bonsai tree -- but I only got that impression after you mentioned it.


I think, like you, that if it were a little "flatter," perhaps stretching horizontally, it would resemble a bonsai more.  I would remove the top set of of branches and foliage, and see how that goes.


Quick and dirty mock-up:




Perhaps another branch stretching a bit to the left side may help too.

By the way, good job on the graphics.

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